That's a great suggestion Deb. Thanks for that. I'm sure there'll be many more tweaks along the way. I picked this extract a few days ago because I thought it wasn't too bad, and then I revised it about six times before I put it up. LOL - I kept finding something else that could be cut or shown in a different light. I really appreciate your feedback. I'm up to 28 000 words and have about 92 000 to go. How hard can it be?
That's a great suggestion Deb. Thanks for that. I'm sure there'll be many more tweaks along the way. I picked this extract a few days ago because I thought it wasn't too bad, and then I revised it about six times before I put it up. LOL - I kept finding something else that could be cut or shown in a different light. I really appreciate your feedback. I'm up to 28 000 words and have about 92 000 to go. How hard can it be?