Intriguing, Nola. I like the name for your novel, also.
I was wondering about the effect his mild comment made on her. Maybe what he said should have been a little more confronting as she seems to be overreacting. I guess she has an emotional problem that's causing this but a reader might think she's acting like a nervous wreck.
Hope I don't sound harsh, just trying to give a fair critique.
Hi Rita - Thanks for that. I appreciate your feedback. This scene takes place in Chapter 4, so there is some other info about Libby prior to this, so the reader would hopefully understand why she's reacting this way. But Tom doesn't know that info yet. Maybe I should think more about how he'd respond. You've given me food for thought. Thanks :)
Intriguing, Nola. I like the name for your novel, also.
I was wondering about the effect his mild comment made on her. Maybe what he said should have been a little more confronting as she seems to be overreacting. I guess she has an emotional problem that's causing this but a reader might think she's acting like a nervous wreck.
Hope I don't sound harsh, just trying to give a fair critique.
Hi Rita - Thanks for that. I appreciate your feedback. This scene takes place in Chapter 4, so there is some other info about Libby prior to this, so the reader would hopefully understand why she's reacting this way. But Tom doesn't know that info yet. Maybe I should think more about how he'd respond. You've given me food for thought. Thanks :)