Thanks for your useful post, Nola. Of the two loglines at the end, I think I prefer the second one. The first seems a bit wordy to me.
Thanks Jeanette. I think I like the second one too, though I might try to work in the time and place. I found it hard to do the logline, so it was good for me to research what others have done. Thanks for your comment.
Thanks for your useful post, Nola. Of the two loglines at the end, I think I prefer the second one. The first seems a bit wordy to me.
Thanks Jeanette. I think I like the second one too, though I might try to work in the time and place. I found it hard to do the logline, so it was good for me to research what others have done. Thanks for your comment.