Hi Rita - Thanks for that. I appreciate your feedback. This scene takes place in Chapter 4, so there is some other info about Libby prior to this, so the reader would hopefully understand why she's reacting this way. But Tom doesn't know that info yet. Maybe I should think more about how he'd respond. You've given me food for thought. Thanks :)
Hi Rita - Thanks for that. I appreciate your feedback. This scene takes place in Chapter 4, so there is some other info about Libby prior to this, so the reader would hopefully understand why she's reacting this way. But Tom doesn't know that info yet. Maybe I should think more about how he'd respond. You've given me food for thought. Thanks :)